Thursday, December 17, 2009

To Kill an Essay

Here it is - your final formal essay of the semester. Time to unleash! Time to use everything you've learned this semester! Time to shine, babies! It is time to be a writer!



Essay Overview
A ‘maxim’ can be defined as a concise rule of conduct, a way in which one should behave. In her novel To Kill a Mockingbird, author Harper Lee presents to her audience a character who not only possesses a fair, forgiving moral code, but chooses to live by these rules he believes naturally exist in society. In other words, Atticus chooses to ‘walk the walk’ in lieu of merely ‘talking the talk.’ Following are three maxims Atticus teaches to Scout. Your task in this essay is to either prove or disprove one of the statements. (Page numbers may vary depending on your edition.)

“You never really understand a person until
you consider things from his point of view” (30).

Courage is “when you know you’re
licked before you begin but you begin anyway and
you see it through no mater what” (112).

“We all know men are not created equal
in the sense some people would have us believe” (205).

Format
First, select one of Atticus’ statements. Then plan on whether or not you will prove or disprove it. Finally, find three characters whose actions support your claim.

Focus
Focus especially on the following directives when drafting and revising.
  • Have a clear, concise thesis.
  • Have a clear, concise bridge.
  • Include direct quotations to support each of your body points.
  • Create an interesting, original title that both grabs your readers' attention and gives some insight into the topic of your essay.
  • Follow the correct format for citing direct quotations.
  • Use sophisticated transitions between body points.
  • Avoid awkward language usage. You language should be thoughtful, graceful, and concise.
  • Avoid 1st and 2nd person point of view, contractions, slang, and other informal language usage.
  • Write in present tense.
  • Leave a day or two between the time you write your first draft and the time you revise it.
  • Use the writing consultant in the A.R.C. or your instructor as resources when you hit road blocks in your writing.
  • When you are finished, ask yourself this question: "What am I trying to communicate, and have I succeeded?"
Feel free to post questions in the comments section below. I'll check in occasionally. Again, this is it, folks. This is the last essay of the semester. Your job is to demonstrate how good of a writer you've become. Attention to detail, kids. Revision. No wimps allowed.

No...wimps...allowed.


(Click to enlarge and learn how NOT to be HALF A MAN.)

66 comments:

  1. does each body paragraph consist of each character you choose to prove or disprove the quotes?

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  2. I'm not sure I understand your question. Each paragraph should focus on a separate character. Does this help?

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  3. (click to enlarge and learn how NOT to be HALF A MAN.) You should hear how wrong that sounds Mr. Cowlin

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  4. Mr. Cowlin, can you please give some context to the quote about courage? My book pages are different from yours and I don't know where to find them. Or can you just tell me how many pages are in your book? Thanks.

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  5. Dear Mystery Half-a-Guy...It only sounds wrong to men that are not all men. Again, click to learn how NOT to be HALF A MAN.

    (P.S. 100% real men do not call themselves 'mystery men. They ARE mystery men. That's why they don't need to say it.)

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  6. Sorry, I can't help you with page numbers. You're going to have to search.

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  7. Mr. Cowlin,
    Can Atticus be one of my three characters? I assumed no because he is the one making the maxims, but just to be sure... Thanks!

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  8. Grace - I'd actually be okay with Atticus being one of the three characters, but you've got a point. You might want to avoid him if you feel it is too repetitive. Your choice.

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  9. I am not calling myself the Mystery Guy My real name IS Mystery Guy. And If you insist, I will call myself Mystery MAN from now on. I also assure you that I am a student from one of your class and I need to call myself Mystery Guy since I am.

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  10. I want to give you a "hint" about my class. It's the 8th period class with annika, olivia, marie, matt, marykate, stacey, mike, paul, grace, paul, elizabeth, christine, kevin, tanya, nikki, roderick, mahak, and tony. That's the proof. And no tony was not it. I'm sorry for missing anyone if I did. Also the sign should be (Click to Enlarge. If you dare. jk. lol. lmao. omg. roflmaof. wursc. W00TTTTTTTT.)(http://simple.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_Internet_slang_words)-link to slang words. Warning: All viewer discretion is advised. Seriously.

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  11. I got alittle off track on the comment before, but have fun figuring out who the Mystery Man is. If you have not figured it out by end of two weeks, I will tell you in someway. that you will know for sure.

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  12. Myester MAN im sorry to say but honestly your not getting anywere with this...I couldnt sit around and read you ridiculous comments, it seems as if your having a converstaion with yourself. haha to be a man is to reveal your true identity (in this case), but then again, what am i to say, you are a MAN right?

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  13. Very true tony, so I will never reveal my identity and stop this thing.

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  14. Mystery Man - I will find you. I swear it. I will find you!

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  15. albatross and mystery. i can spell!

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  16. albatross. I wasn't paying attention in class, so I'm assuming that, the word albatross is what I am suppose to say to prove that I am in 8th period class...? Even if I was in class, I would have forgotten the word by the time I got home. hahaha Good way to make sure. Even though someone could have told me even if I am in 6th period class.

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  17. I have a question for the essay. I did one of the examples about atticus and it kind of covered the two quotes the first one and the second one(Essay is on the first quote.) Should I change it or is that good?

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  18. Paul - I don't think it matters if one of your examples hits two of the maxims. Since you're only discussing one of the maxims, your reader would never probably notice. In other words, move ahead, just don't mention the second maxim (the one you are not examining in your essay.)

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  19. Well done, Paul.

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  20. I just realized, Mystery MAN could have had more fun and set their name as Mr. Cowlin, as I did :)

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  21. But that would be wrong...

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  22. I am Mitch Veytsel

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  23. No wait I'm Mitch Veytsel. He's an imposter!!!!

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  24. Mitch and I are best buds. You should give him an A+ for the semester.

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  25. Chris Thomas is fat

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  26. Rude. You want to box this out Rocky?

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  27. hey i am Rambo

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  28. Lockness "Nessy" MonsterJanuary 7, 2010 at 6:54 PM

    Hi everyone! I have a question. How many months have 28 days?

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  29. Hey i am only like 200 pounds

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  30. No only 4 months

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  31. I am the best of both worlds

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  32. Larry the Cable GuyJanuary 7, 2010 at 7:01 PM

    Get er done!

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  33. Arnold ShwartzenegerJanuary 7, 2010 at 7:02 PM

    Hasta lavista baby

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  34. giggggggggity gigggggggggity

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  35. They're after me lucky charms!

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  36. There not just good their great!

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  37. I want trix

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  38. wanna know how i got these scars?

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  39. honestly...this is not facebook or something. It's a class blog thing. can you just stop!?

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  40. I am Mystery MAN(iron man theme song playing in the background.) And I'm not mitch. I told you that i would reveal after 2 weeks if you have not figured it out... If they were going to pretend, they should have read the ones from before.

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  41. im cuckoo for cocoa puffs.

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  42. you guys are more annoying than poor kids at Toys R Us

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  43. you guys make me feel like posting annoying things
    http://bcgccaw392.blogspot.com/

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  44. Mr. Cowlin- I wrote the essay and it makes the point better to combine the two quotes and mentioning both. Should I still say only one?

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  45. Mr. Colwin, I think I am going with the first quote, but I'm not quite understanding what I'm being asked to do. Should I be putting myself in each of the three different characters shoes, or finding examples of when they put themselves in someone else's shoes?

    Thanks

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  46. I mean because the quote is talking about considering things in their point of view, not because I think that's what the instructions are.

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  47. Paul - in answer to your question: "Mr. Cowlin- I wrote the essay and it makes the point better to combine the two quotes and mentioning both. Should I still say only one?"

    Bring it in a show me and we'll assess the answer together in class.

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  48. Shayne - "Should I be putting myself in each of the three different characters shoes, or finding examples of when they put themselves in someone else's shoes?"

    The second one. You are not part of this essay. No first person, no personal stories, etc. Everything is from the book. Find examples of characters putting themselves in other people's shoes.

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  49. Mr. Cowlin, i did the 3rd quote. And i was wondering if it would be ok if i said since people are created equally, they get different treatments as a result?

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  50. I mean are not created equally.

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  51. You can't wait to read my essay, right Mr. Cowlin? because I have an awesome essay. And also it will reveal who I am. have fun reading all 50 essays though.

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  52. i like chocolate doughnuts and like and stop making fun of me because of my weight. I can't help it. Mr. Cowlin can you make them stop?

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  53. Mystery Man - Haven't you figured it out yet? I don't read these essays. I have a chicken, and I throw them on the floor of her coop. Which ever two she pecks at first get A's. The rest...C minuses.

    Good old Mable. Mable the essay grading chicken.

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  54. I sold you Mable, if you don't remember... She'll probably recognize my smell and peck on it. I bet you that. Though I'm not sure chickens have a good nose. But I always thought you ate the chickens that I sold you. I saw the difference every time I saw you. Or was it just me? Have Fun with Mable. and make sure not to eat him. because my nickname for Mable was lightning, and remember that You're gonna eat lightning and crap thunder. Ouch.

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  55. Stephanie VinieratosJanuary 13, 2010 at 4:05 PM

    I have a question about the essay final, so i'll just write it here, what does it mean when you said there has to be two examples in each body paragraph? Does that mean we have to write 2 quotes?

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